Self-evaluatoin
3.5 for the part of the literary analysis.
7 for the part of the performance.
I gave myself a 3.5 for the part of the literary analysis because I think I provided lots evidence for my explanation and they are mostly efficient. However, the literary analysis is lack of creativity. I should either add more details in or try to find more ways to approach my points of view. For the performance part, I explained the details and our plans for it in a logical order. It's easy to understand and to have some images in minds as I read along. However, it is more of an explanation. It's just like telling some facts instead of illustrating something interesting. I should adjust my wording more and try to make it more amusing for people to read. I didn't grade the third part of the written coursework because the part that I put on as my second draft hasn't started to talk about it yet. Overall, my essay is in a good shape with clear logic and order. But that doesn't make it a good essay. The vocabularies I use in it are generally simple. This problem applies to all of my essays. I think I should spend more time expanding my vocabularies. Good amount of vocabulary can make my essay sound more like a "smart essay".
7 for the part of the performance.
I gave myself a 3.5 for the part of the literary analysis because I think I provided lots evidence for my explanation and they are mostly efficient. However, the literary analysis is lack of creativity. I should either add more details in or try to find more ways to approach my points of view. For the performance part, I explained the details and our plans for it in a logical order. It's easy to understand and to have some images in minds as I read along. However, it is more of an explanation. It's just like telling some facts instead of illustrating something interesting. I should adjust my wording more and try to make it more amusing for people to read. I didn't grade the third part of the written coursework because the part that I put on as my second draft hasn't started to talk about it yet. Overall, my essay is in a good shape with clear logic and order. But that doesn't make it a good essay. The vocabularies I use in it are generally simple. This problem applies to all of my essays. I think I should spend more time expanding my vocabularies. Good amount of vocabulary can make my essay sound more like a "smart essay".
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